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Photography Photography \ Uncategorized | 10/29/04 @131 | Basil | Comments critiques (53) | Views views (2650)


Feral..
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pic of my kid again :)

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Tv( Shutter Speed )
1/60
Av( Aperture Value )
4.0
ISO Speed
100
Lens
18.0 - 55.0mm
Focal Length
25.0mm
Flash
On


as always .. CRITS please...

*edit* just for the hell of it (and because those series things never work for me hehe) .. I added a photo of when she looked up.. like two seconds after this one.. to the DL section below.. it has basicly the same specs as this one.. but I focused on the eyes with a tighter apeture
 
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Avatar Alecueous

 10/29/04 @220

Awwww! Cute little feral creature! I love the black and white, and the expression. Very.....okay, lost my train of thought. +a bunch
 
Avatar Phryneas

 10/29/04 @342

hey, that's exactly how I look at 7 o'clock in the morning! ^^
great expression :)
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 10/29/04 @365

Excellent!
 
Avatar A78

 10/29/04 @463

good shoot!
 
Avatar mrhollow

 10/29/04 @589

I like this one alot. There's something on the right that's shadowing the left side of the image, but the composition and contrast are great. The blurry lines (Her hair?) in the foreground also add an interesting depth to the image.

This is one of my favorites you've done so far.
 
Avatar Basil

 10/29/04 @628

thanks everyone...
I guess I should give alot of credit to my 4 year old daughter heh.. sometimes I am shocked at how well she can show emotion in photos... and she never looks bad :) ... Maybe I should enroll her in modeling
 
wench

 10/29/04 @637

great shot
 
Avatar starturtle

 10/29/04 @670

lovely one ...
 
Avatar Marloe

 10/29/04 @723

Great
 
Avatar Moni

 10/29/04 @866

Yeah..gr8
 
Avatar Basil

 10/29/04 @937

Woah thanks.. !! to think I got this photo from laying under a table and playing peek-boo hehe(thumbup) did not expect such a reaction... um...

I think this is my first Moni comment!!
and ThruMyeyeZ + starturtle (my fav photo-manipulater)

I am pretty shocked... thanks all

ps.. Mrhollow thanks for the crit :) you have to be the most helpful commenter here (thumbup)
 
Avatar robin74

 10/30/04 @732

This is gorgeous Basil. She looks like Mo in the second one. The hair makes the shot for me :) Excellent
 
Avatar Square772

 10/31/04 @937

Holy Mo clone in the 2nd shot!!! And now that I understand the perspective here, this is one of my favorites of yours. I especially like how the eyes are highlighted in the 2nd photo. Excellent job, my friend!
 
Avatar maytree

 11/01/04 @432

Excellent :)
 
Avatar Sven

 11/01/04 @450

Beautiful shot! :)
 
Avatar Comtesse

 11/01/04 @689

that is so adorable.
 
Avatar Andrzej

 11/02/04 @632

Very good shot... good choice of frame, light and angle... For me is perfect. Nice and unusual DOF effect on hers hairs... JUST - GOOOD ONE !!!
Mostly i criticque coresponding betwin camera and model but it's this case i can't!!!
 
LED

 11/03/04 @046

good one, the light is right on her yes, good.just lit a little, doing good with the malicious look.the hair is good, well.....you have a good cam ;) you definitely should have retouched the dark part on her...because, there's no place for a "dead", unvisible zone in a pic unless it has a precise meaning.the high contrast on her, opposed to the blurry low one of her room is good.expresses a strong personnality in a normal setting.So....here's my critic:two drawbacks: the cut fingers and the dark zone. good one (you know that I know shit) ;)
 
Avatar Basil

 11/03/04 @050

I know led.. from the french computer arts mag :p

you have actually been much help in my evolution (thumbup)
 
Avatar tregstreet

 11/03/04 @099

cute, - and good shot. I still miss the fingertips, though it keeps the focus on the fuzzy hair, - intended ? 6/7
 
Avatar Basil

 11/03/04 @108

yup.. I cropped them out.
thanks btw
 
LED

 11/03/04 @145

oh yeah ? well thx....lemme receive these flowers with no shame in public .the smileys DO suck here so there's none.I think you'd do great if you shot pics for your chops.think of something, shoot on purpose, and chop it..just a suggestion, but it opens many doors
 
Avatar Basil

 11/03/04 @158

LED ;) I didnt mean to sound cocky..

8o you know i loves ya man.... and I take your crit as gold... but you should know that by now :) I base alot of my composition on your crits.. and chops as well :)

You get a +10 for helping me over time... I have had a short time to improve and still working

do take pics to chop actually- that was the original motive.
I plan to try to get my 500 votes in manipulation this month because I know two other who can too ;) you being one. Then we can have a nice elite vote for manipulation
I think chops deserve more credit... for the sake of you,starturtle, chrispis and also mozub- and other artists.
 
Avatar deshone

 11/03/04 @612

not bad ... ;)
 
Avatar ReinMan

 11/03/04 @730

Damn! I was away most of the week and missed this until now!

Excellent shot, Basil! And good choice over the "more cuter" eyes-up pic - this one makes me think more about what is on that little one's mind (probalby mischief! :) )
 
Avatar DarkAnubis

 11/03/04 @759

nice foto.. the expression on her is realy FErral.. ;)

Well captured.. ;)
 
Avatar choke

 11/03/04 @842

awesome shot. +9
 
cory

 11/03/04 @915

As if it was made in a studio. The '2secs later' version doesn't appeal to me that much, mostly because of composition.

Still, this main one is almost perfect. Can't give you 8 yet, so it's 7/7 ;)
 
Avatar Basil

 11/03/04 @927

hehe I wish I had a studio

and thanks... right now all I have is my camera and my wierd imagination...
I guess I will one day and break down for some lighting... but that will be a while down the road
 
Avatar billtvshow

 11/03/04 @963

great sense of chaos with the hair
 
LED

 11/04/04 @010

basil....you weren't cocky, I was just drunk when I wrote it.I'm serious, try shooting on purpose fer making composition, it's the mix of good photo and choppin.
 
LED

 11/04/04 @010

I'm still drunk
 
LED

 11/04/04 @011

plus your chops kick ass
 
Avatar Basil

 11/04/04 @552

I am a karate expert led!!!
 
Avatar cupcake

 11/04/04 @877

great work +8
 
Avatar splodge

 11/04/04 @945

wild child, love it!!
 
Avatar amorphous

 11/05/04 @058

beautiful photo. +7! (thumbup)

what a cutie poo!
 
Avatar eremita

 11/05/04 @290

Excelent Compo, Shinning!
Congrats!
 
Avatar Andy--Jones

 11/06/04 @046

I just love the hair! all kids should have hair like that.+8
 
Avatar djoe

 11/07/04 @461

Very fine work !!!!!
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http://graphiste.crea.free.fr
 
MagicMute

 11/09/04 @191

its mischievous! great!
 
Avatar Basil

 11/09/04 @562

thanks..
 
Avatar RistTO

 11/09/04 @947

awe-some
 
Avatar eremita

 11/23/04 @707

9/9 I forget to vote when I did my comment
 
Avatar Meagan

 11/29/04 @488

lmao What a fitting title. Adorable work!
 
Avatar Hklevjer

 11/29/04 @937

nice hair do - or whatever it's called
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 01/02/05 @642

TOP WORK !!!!!!!!!!
 
Avatar Fooxoo

 02/11/05 @616

THAT HAIR ROCKS!

Absolutely fantastic photo! Beautiful, with feeling, perfect lightning, composition!
And the one after 2 seconds is good as well!

9+
 
punkagrrlzero

 06/26/05 @823

mmmm. bed head!
Awsome image ... good exposure and what a fun subject...
as you know already... short focal, but you have the other one...
good one.
 
Avatar Biter

 10/05/05 @672

Sweeeeeeet
 
Avatar Cigaro

 01/22/06 @684

i love the expression
a bit funny and a bit adorable:)
i like the compo as well and perspective...the 2 seconds after one is great as well;)
 
Avatar saajila

 01/25/06 @320

ooooooooooo

Sweeeeetooooo:)
(Y)
excellent
 
Avatar blackshad

 01/26/06 @895

top marks
awesome picture :))
 
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